tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post945662000413382758..comments2023-10-02T19:30:13.876-05:00Comments on Words from the Wench: Partial Fiction: She's Probably Just NutsNessa Lockehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10793613496258240147noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-19500029937794481622011-12-07T22:49:47.848-06:002011-12-07T22:49:47.848-06:00wow, i want to read more of this story, and i just...wow, i want to read more of this story, and i just read the other part you linked to. <br />i can't wait for the day i get to read one of your novels, i love your stuff. :)idhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12225622110195088126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-56330993966736818962011-12-05T23:58:23.002-06:002011-12-05T23:58:23.002-06:00I remember reading this like 2 years ago. I like G...I remember reading this like 2 years ago. I like Grace. :)Sara Katenoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-90898310749197880982011-12-02T02:41:30.873-06:002011-12-02T02:41:30.873-06:00Nicely done! I shall amble over to see the rest. I...Nicely done! I shall amble over to see the rest. I love your fiction. On a separate note, sorry for my short-lived, no-warning vanishing. I had to change the blog to escape someone who should not be reading it.light208https://www.blogger.com/profile/08963433460783023131noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-69545023874630648662011-12-01T13:11:31.221-06:002011-12-01T13:11:31.221-06:00Oh Jayne.....I don't know if I can make those ...Oh Jayne.....I don't know if I can make those kinds of promises.Nessa Lockehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10793613496258240147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-50417786350428598002011-11-30T21:25:11.727-06:002011-11-30T21:25:11.727-06:00Oh yes, light flowing from him into her. Whoa. A ...Oh yes, light flowing from him into her. Whoa. A sweet little wood nymph princess. All the makings of a... wait, no!, now I see your comment--this isn't really going to turn ugly, is it? Oh, classic Nessa stuff. Ok, I'll deal with the turn of events. But please don't hurt the wood nymph!Jaynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06694559900539722616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-63390432501230496692011-11-29T18:53:09.183-06:002011-11-29T18:53:09.183-06:00Grunt- I highly recommend it. I'll be happy to...Grunt- I highly recommend it. I'll be happy to read any words that flow my direction.<br /><br />Cold-well, I never knew you were into the superhero scene...;)Nessa Lockehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10793613496258240147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-53168521884678070142011-11-29T13:09:00.975-06:002011-11-29T13:09:00.975-06:00Good flowing dialog. A superhero is a guy helping ...Good flowing dialog. A superhero is a guy helping a woman split the woods. I'm fairly good at that. It's all about having a big and heavy axe >:)<br /><br /><a href="http://cold-as-heaven.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Cold As Heaven</a>CA Heavenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07558100567878233142noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-49915677480325743422011-11-28T23:07:59.033-06:002011-11-28T23:07:59.033-06:00Partial fiction based on your last comment had me ...Partial fiction based on your last comment had me wondering what is fiction and what isn't. I used to write a lot and now I don't. I should take it up again.The Grunthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03845796879498225434noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-6663300072051577372011-11-23T21:56:17.638-06:002011-11-23T21:56:17.638-06:00Well...if it'll make you feel better, four or ...Well...if it'll make you feel better, four or five people get murdered, three get raped and the little girl and her doll...well, I don't want to spoil it for you...Nessa Lockehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10793613496258240147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-5337662816177743632011-11-23T20:17:14.006-06:002011-11-23T20:17:14.006-06:00So, this is just a mutherfuckingbodiceripper you g...So, this is just a <i>mutherfuckingbodiceripper</i> you grabbed my attention with?!? Now, I feel kind of dirty. And I read the other three pages by the way. Damn you...but well done.Robbie Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06708885869170287258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-57530336488493979822011-11-23T19:06:25.934-06:002011-11-23T19:06:25.934-06:00Actually, I've already finished this story. It...Actually, I've already finished this story. It's part of a drama/romance that I wrote a couple of years ago. It's about 117,000 words. (I guess I had a lot to say.) The plot is weak, but the characters are entertaining.<br />There's another piece of it posted <a href="http://wordsfromthewench.blogspot.com/2011/02/three-pages-of-fiction.html" rel="nofollow">here</a>Nessa Lockehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10793613496258240147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-20306251688888602862011-11-23T11:54:08.394-06:002011-11-23T11:54:08.394-06:00wow i love it...great flow of conversation...belie...wow i love it...great flow of conversation...believe me that is a hard one to nail.<br />expand this one further i reckon..tease those characters out and you could have something even better!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-56737742605636368402011-11-23T04:51:55.132-06:002011-11-23T04:51:55.132-06:00What a great story Nessa, I really liked it. You n...What a great story Nessa, I really liked it. You nailed the characters conversation, something I'm really struggling with at the moment. Are you going to continue this tale or is it a one off?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-81958176296257986522011-11-22T22:00:21.441-06:002011-11-22T22:00:21.441-06:00More, please...More, please...Robbie Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06708885869170287258noreply@blogger.com