tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post3326432426902093358..comments2023-10-02T19:30:13.876-05:00Comments on Words from the Wench: Fiction:For Lack of a BlackbirdNessa Lockehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10793613496258240147noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-30949166908096123412011-09-03T21:27:16.601-05:002011-09-03T21:27:16.601-05:00E gads, girl, you do know how to build suspense! W...E gads, girl, you do know how to build suspense! Wow, I'm shaking now. I think I'm going to have another glass of red. <br /><br />Excellent shot! Er, I mean short. ;)Jaynehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06694559900539722616noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-57634596215274873122011-09-01T21:10:03.815-05:002011-09-01T21:10:03.815-05:00Indy, I left out details on purpose. Did you notic...Indy, I left out details on purpose. Did you notice, you have no idea what she looks like?<br /><br />Andressa. Thanks for stopping by<br /><br />Robbie- thanks. I'm getting better at these short stories. <br /><br />Pearl- Yes. Damn cow...totally cheevil.Nessa Lockehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10793613496258240147noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-82039103547623387342011-09-01T16:12:39.882-05:002011-09-01T16:12:39.882-05:00Great visuals, great detail.
Damn cow. :-)
Pear...Great visuals, great detail.<br /><br />Damn cow. :-)<br /><br />PearlPearlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05261369905176088917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-51862937941237946542011-09-01T11:21:24.806-05:002011-09-01T11:21:24.806-05:00That was amazing. Deja vu all over again, as it we...That was amazing. <i>Deja vu</i> all over again, as it were.Robbie Greyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06708885869170287258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1379910395905801815.post-40792435875751317362011-09-01T06:08:03.508-05:002011-09-01T06:08:03.508-05:00i guess she should have taken that cow a little mo...i guess she should have taken that cow a little more seriously...<br /><br />i liked this a lot, i was able to picture it all in my head again. i think you have a way of describing things really well without going overboard with too much description, it's like somehow you know the perfect amount. :)<br /><br />(also, i had a car just like that, cutlass that you had to keep your foot on the gas when you were stopped at stoplights.)idhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12225622110195088126noreply@blogger.com